feelin the verse.....havin a little trouble catchin the depth to it, but it sounds tight, good flow and multis in there. flows nicely......street essence to it like M said. really feelin the last 2 lines. i like the statement and closer was clever and cool, talkin bout your struggle and shit. if u ever decide to make it longer i would say to elaborate a bit and go into a little more depth into what ever subject you were thinkin about.

thanks...