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Old 11-19-03, 06:10 PM   #7
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pretty good verse, room for elevation though. came hard and strong with the point and your emotions and shit, was really feelin that. its like a straight up this is what i am and where i came from type little peice. enjoyed it. only constructive critisizm is to work on the flow by makin sure each line fits in a beat...or maybe it wasnt supposed to be like that..? anyways nice job.
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