"Cuz bruk said so"
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IP:
A very good piece which deserves to be read. I liked this alot, very fullfilling. I did not feel as if there should be more to this, as so many pieces leave you feeling. I like the flow and the structure, nothing to complicated but on point. Nicely done Ma, much props.
I seen the rain as the calamity, pain and anxieties brought on by life. I felt as if you were standing there in the misdts of all these armed with only your pen and pad. As if you were writting to help heal understand and or deal with those everyday tribulations. With such irony, the same rains, washed away your written words, your life's work with just one downfall. It's funny how life can derail us like that, wash away our treasured works. to write about your pain is just to relive it at times, or such, but to put the pad down and leave things forgotten seems to be less painfull. Ironic twist for the soul of a poet. Your damned if you and damn if you don't type of scenerio. Well, that's what impression your words left on me. Thanks for making me think.
Respect
~Bounce~
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