MR: ur shit was all ova tha place, good than bad, than good again........but than bad again, keep it all good n u'll be much better...
i'm deep in the set like Juelz santana,i got cadillacs on 22's like david banner/
I'm staying on top, while you going down down baby like country grammer/
aight, i guess... it would have flowed better wit commas so peeps know to say it like tha song....
PB: first off...don't spit racial slurs, it won't help u, i am native american(indian) so watch it...other than that, ur's was a bit below average, tha hits were there but not comin hard enuff...
This aint a hospital and there isnt a cure for wackness,
Unless you have the patience to sit a year n practice,
^^ ok, could have been better wit tha hospital spelling "patients" instead of patience to tie tha whole bar together...
vote: it was real close but tha fact that BP (even wit tha slur) came constant gave him my vote....
yo, hit this up wit an honest vote to keep shit poppin...
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