thankyou for the replies....
no i have not read 'illusions' or seen 'son in law'... sorry, but if you can make the comparison, great.
First to Bouncedoggy, I really liked that interpretation. It was not what I had meant but it was definately on the same lines. I see here the narrator as the GOD you speak of and interchange these two for his point of view. But it can be looked upon on that level.. thankyou for your thought.

Chasin- think of what you write. Who do you write for? what response do you expect? I often see my work as greater than others see it but of course that's because I am aware of all that i imply in my writing and what inspired it...
look at the first man you see and then who he is after the transition. He is the same man, no smarter or dumber, but he is able to realize that he cannot please the world. That is not genuine. So, to turn away from the pompous, greedy individual that he is, he must do things for himself. Ironic if you ask me.
But yeah I liked what you got out of it, I thank you for your constant interest in my work.

Tourniquet - thankyou for your generous thought - Affirmation/Doubt/Acceptance/Graduation - i like the way you put it there.
Yes i graduated... I stopped writing shit and started writing something that means something.. at least to me... and I decided not to worry about others so much. I am able to write more freely now. The other piece I have on these boards, 'Ignorance', was written after this one, and it is quite different.
So double-O - it was me that i was talking about intentionally.

I really appreciate that you all took time to read it.
thanks
.peace.

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