thanks all of ya'll, even holster with the 4 word response
i'm gla that this IS getting read
about the ~ before the lines i did that both out of boredom and to try and make it easier to read since i was going to post it, and most people dont know how to read certain poems right, i dont like to post things and then someone not get the flow, you know?
but anyways
i liked both of your interpertations,
but bounce was more near the point
none the less they were both enjoyable
thanks again
upping

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."