Wow...wow...wow..., I need to gather myself after reading this, it touched me, emotions were blazing, heartache was felt, but you never injected anger which I thinks was amazing. Being able to express emoiton wihtout anger is one hell of a talent, I could not pull it off. There is nothing to critic here, since this a drop from the heart, no matter what you wrote it is pure and raw. I see no need for a critic but just acknoledgement on how you made the reader feel your pain and sorrow. Not in a whoa is me type vibe but a beuatiful expression of hurt, anguish and admiration as well. A very amazing drop, we all could feel your love and pain, but most off all the respect you wove into this peice. It's not an easy accomplishment or one we wish to asprie for, but tragidy has a way of unleashing that poetic beast in us all. Thank you for posting this, as I am sure so many will appreicate it for what it is and not reduce it with needless technical critics. Mija you are an amazing person with talent to match, keep focused and apply yourself, I am confident you will suceed at what ever pursiut you take in life.

God bless you and good luck always

~Bounce~

My deepest condolences on your loss.

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