"Boundries In Life Are Hazerdous As The Taste Of Polluted H-2-O
Createn Acid Rain As Thus Disapearing The Atmisphere Tomorrow"

this line is very thoughtful an creates a siniter effect, My mind instantly illustrates a image of poverty, coruption, struggle an hope... this line alone made this peice what it is ...

"I've Had My Ups & Downs As Many Times As'a Functional Elavator
I'm Realistic A Simple Clown Pulled From Lifes Journy Escalator"

Strong opening to the second verse an I like the very relivent hook..

good lookin' uppin' for feed back on my suffering from nostalgia track which can relate to dis... overall 9/10