opener:dom
closer:dom
wordplay:forshadow
structure:tie
punches:dom
overall:dom


som took this with harder hitting punches, and for shadow, you need to use some different vocab, u seem like u just throw the odd word in here and there.


i took the time to hit this up, plz return the favor and vote on the battle in my sig.

aiight

peace

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