opener:Tie
closer:Pine
wordplay:Tie
structure:Pine
punches:Tie
overall:Pine

pine just edged this one, if mofo hadnt, in his closer used a played line then this might of been a different story. also mofo ur structure needs a lil work , ur lines were stretched at time. Pine u need to land harder hitting punches, the ideas were there jus not the wordplay.

aiight

i tookt the time to hit this battle, with an explanation, break down and a honest vote. please hit the battle in my sig up with an honest vote.

aiight

peace

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