opener:poetic
closer:Tie
wordplay:Game
structure:poetic
punches:poetic
overall:poetic


aiight game you need to fix your structure, and also work on your wordplay, and punches. poetic be lucky you got my vote, you only just scraped this one, you also need to keep elevatin.

aaigght

will both y'all peep my battle with Lm, its in my sig.

aiight

peace

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