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De M-O-D Bruk
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IP:
Wow...
Nok'd..
That was a horrible rhyme scheme...that didn't really appeal to me at all..I didn't really feel your verse at all...The imagery was lackin as well as the vocabulary...you have alot of elevating to do...
Tik:
Weak verse as well but at least it was a little bit better...your imagery was faint and weak...but at least it was faint...also your vocab was fectched in spots but at least you used bigger words...
Edited to please certain people who have interesting opinions.
vote tix
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