Mary~Jane This fake's spine gets cracked and shattered, then gets his head swelled
only time this wankstas holdin 'heat' is when he's in the kitchen wit egg 'shells'!/

^played

Your breath smells... no wonder why your 'spits stink'
I eat JDeaZy too easy, leave his cut up like an ice rink/

^ ok line

I hope you dont act gangsta, claimin you light snubs
When this home-bound nerd is just dreamin about Fight Club/

^no, maybe i missed something but theis line was useless

I write love thats why I get it, I write true thats why you sweat it
You prewrite your verse, then when its posted hit edit/

^weak

Cuz you cant freestyle kid, you dont know how or what to do
So just get down on both knees and just be you!/

^weak again closers are suposed to be your best line.


jdeazy
Look, I took that pussy and now this bitch is shook//
I 'cum' harder in my sleep than this weak ho's whole hook//

^ cum lines are played fuck a cum line, and that one was one of the weakest ones i have seen

'wet dreams' about DeaZ got ya mind clouded -disturbed//
ya 'mind-a-blur' like retatred kids at lunch you 'get served'//

^i guess, that could be a punch but its weak

wit'a "L" (loss) like you hit tha dope man's spot -wrong//
you on ya hands and knees 'fuckin' where you belong//

^ no

She claims she's a dime when she really only put 2-cents-in//
When I spit, you like your herpes, feelin' "pain and distension"//

first line was ehhhh, 2nd no

convincin' inventions, I'm a plane to ya 'World Trade" -I'm comin' in//
You write 'love' -DeaZ nutz-on-ya-chin, like wit' ya 'X' you got slapped again//

^ weak, closers are suposed to hit harder then every other line


my vote goes to mary jane, i just thought she/he had a better verse, overall