Tourniquet hes not really supposed to...theres a dont
ask dont tell them policy thats imprented in our heads
and it goes for far more than just homosexuality....
im not gay...my girlfriends beautiful..now that thats
cleared..but the phrase is in reference to how the
life is lived day in and day out....

Bounce anyones stupid messing with you in real life...

as for your poem it was long and you kept a simple
rhyme scheme all the way through but also had the
emotion and vocabluary to back you up all the way
through and keep my attention...it honestly seems like
something that I would hear from P.O.D when they
were worth listening to..the talents definately shown

if anything this ups my statements of you being a great artist