I can see how the circumstances we grow-up in can make success seem so far fetched. It's a struggle, in which you did point out in your drop. I was feeling your vibe, but it kind of went from one area to the next. Not so much as to take away from the general sense or flow, but enough to be noticed. You had me interested in reading your points and views but at the same time I found myself distracted. The distraction came from the sense that you could have elaberated more on certain elements or incorperated better imagery. Either way, I think you should ad to this fill in the areas that are most troubling to you. Tell us what you propose should be done and why. Emotion was there, your flow seemed to be forced in certain areas. I have the same problem sometimes, but hey where all trying new things here.

On a political level I think this was very vauge and lacked detail. When making a political statement you need to offer more for your auidence to chew, so to speak. Politics are heavy and complex, they deserve to be presented in such a way to support and fortify your arguments. Just my two centz, if it's even worth that. I differ where your political statements are made but in general I enjoyed this drop. No need to get into a political debate, just making an observation.

~Bounce~

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