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Originally posted by bouncedoggydog
This piece was writting as a rap, it's song and the auido forced me to repeat certain lines jsut to keep up with the tempo of the rap. It was tough at first but then I removed some complex words and replaced them with easier to spit type.
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Well that makes sense to me lol Explains why the rhythm had me reading it faster than I normally would.. because the rhythm was strong.. Unfortunately, I am in no way a vocal artist ('rapper' if you will) so found myself tripping over the words a little.. ergo my comments.
Now, that I know you are of the military mentality, your 'closed off' writing makes sense to me also
T.