this piece had emotion, from the title and the first line or two i thought you was going to take it in a different direction.....but you didnt
in certain ways i can relate, but since its for real n from the heart no critiquing is needed
but in reply to your sig, love and friends can betray you sometimes but they arent always bad to you, sometimes love and friends can give you a word of encouragement and that little push to help you through the hard times, once you block yourself from any of the two (love and friends) the true ones will come, and in the end you will lose out.......just how i see it
keep writing

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Poetry
Don't Look Into My Eyes Forgotten
Understanding Once Again
"It requires wisdom to understand wisdom:
the music is nothing if the audience is deaf."