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Old 11-21-03, 08:46 AM   #12
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Stone Fags & Merk Herbs..& I Do Be Smokin' Crack Pipes..
Not Another N00b Verse.? I'm Dope..Hes The Token Whack Guy!!
^^quite a nice punch with wordplay

He Got No Chance To Win..1st Token Then Enhance..Who Write Ya Rhymes.?
Fag^ Could Chill With Horny Cainines And Still Not Have Dawgs By His Side!!!
^^ok wordplay

Kid Cant Defeat Me..Puns Be Weak..Ya Hurtin Soft Im Wreckin Fables..
Got Proof He's Queer..His Avy Looks Like Hes Jerkin' Cock And Gettin' Anal!!
^^blah.....

Drop 5 Puns On You..Ahh x2..So I Burn Then Leave You Fry-Ten'd-Fool..
Kid Got Merked Last Week..By A Bulb!!I Know I Don't Need To N LitEn You!?!
^ok setup but weak punch

Slap This Kid..Witness The Merking In Reverse..Cunt You Suck..
Fag..Comes Half Assed Then Lays Down..So 'Volve Can Fuck Him Up!!
^better punch

Fuckin Wit' phiX..It's Like Throwing Pussies To Lions..Bitch's Maimed..
Match-Up Left Enhance..I Mean Token..Uh? Tryna Dodge Battlin' By Switchin' Names!!
^average finisher

6/10


You should've taken your own advice when you said Run Nucca Run
PhiXion couldn't spit hard punches with rocks attatched to his tongue
^nice opener

Your lines have no flow.. like guys with urinary infections
Get the boxing network for a chance to have punching connections
^ very average punch

The vision of phixions stay is getting smaller, like dialated lenses
If your visualizing a win, then your missing your pupil senses
...nice vocab but weak punch

We told you to get courageous.. and you jumped off a bridge
Your verse was the cause.. for that smiley in my sig
^average punch

It's do or die.. So take The Ends advice and go post at the best site
Whos taking you serious when your idea of whats hot is made by little tikes
^very weak bar

You must not be seeing the right W.. like people on blind dates
And as a token of my appreciation
...I made you a new avy...
But for some reason it stopped at elevate
^blah ok finisher

5/10


phixion takes it by a hair, but both verses were weaker than what i expect from both of you,, token expecially, i seen some dope shit from him before but he fell a bit short this time,, phixion is good too but dropped a suprisingly average verse