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Old 11-21-03, 10:27 AM   #9
Xeon
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deacon your view, wordplay and story was right for the topic dope spit. i hope you recovered from the ordeal!!!!!lol

emot i felt your story, ok flow but story lapsed when that guy wanted to go get a beer. good twists but a hard read.
if it wernt for the flow you would have got my vote- sick story

vote deacon

sick from both ---- tight choice