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Old 11-21-03, 12:14 PM   #21
JDeaZy
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This battle was pretty one sided, fa' real.

AT: You had some decent lines,
" "Narcotics" could never be a "dope" mcee, so in other words "Dope" isnt really a "narcotic",
I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it","

and this line was a good hit:
"But even if his "mother was nature" and his "father was fate" he still couldnt parody "destinys child","

and good close:
"Even if this cat showed up with "multiple aliases"... he still couldnt beat me wit "threes company"..."

Narcotics: You had a dope verse here~

ashy? wut im battlyin a femcee now, stop the votes this is proposturis..
no time to stop this, even if it takes all day i got more patience then doctors.. (<-Tough ass opener)

lets just begin-spittin an statin facts that your in the wrong Weight look at ya health
this cat gets recog-niton by postin, u cudnt be Heavy if u tryed to constipate..ya self (<-hella nice snap-thought the same myself)

fuka blind spit try to match wits when i speak cuz its hopeless..
only time u try to conentrate is starin at O j carton full focused..
u spittin dope shit is like the raiders makin the playoffs..(LMAAAO)

if u think u had a chance at this battle wit that verse your way off.. (<-aight)

r u sure u aint a lite weight,cuz ya punches r sorta mediocore..
u beatin me is like a fag winning a game in strate poker..(<-LMAO)

when u stepin to me u better be ready,if your tryna attempt me..
this battles gettin heated but no need for the sweat band r u really that sweaty?(AVY)(<-again, tight ass snap)

damn white boy wut u think u facin.dont ever try to compaire ill..
cuz ill leave ya in a head ache state of mind after fallin out ya dads computer chair..
yea. my punches knock out Femcees cuz men contain power..
damn kid u new u wuz up aginst skill thats why u posted the due time in a hour..
leave ya flow devoured cuz your comin up killed..
you remind me of my self when i wasnt this Ill
let my rhymes teach ya lessons, so u mite spit tite..
damn still no sighn of this fag r u sure it aint past ya bed time..

Tha rest, I really doesn't need an explanation, fa' sho.
Only a couple lines from AT stuck, but wit' Narcotics' verse? There were no lines wasted.

open:Narcotics
close:Narcotics
punches:Nartotics
creativity:Narcotics
structure:TIE
flow:Narcotics

Like I said, this was a pretty one sided battle...
Vote: Narcotics