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Old 11-21-03, 12:18 PM   #18
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PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272

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Da Chronic G-

- not good intro... you rhymed bitch and bitch
- not hard punches at the start
- not great metaphors but at least they are there
- not good ending. you need some work my friend... no offense.

keep it up though

J.K.O -

- decent opener... could have been better. but better then opponent

best line-

da chronic g you a chicken, i barely move and he starts to flinchen/
and you i was trippin, bitch you make me sicken/

that was still soft but not bad.

- week ending. you should be better for being 15-7

WINNER: J.K.O by a cunt hair