PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272

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A.T. -

- kinda weak start... too long too
- flow is bad. too many words. needs to be simplified
- swoosh lines are played out...

I've been ill with the "lyrical flu" lately , and "explaining this punch" is the only way that "he caught it",

^^^ not good metaphor at all. sorry man.

- not bad ending.

dude you need a lot of work on your structure. i would like to see you rap that verse to a beat without fukking up!!! lol

Narcotics-

- great opener... more patients then doctors!!! nice
- good disses. structure is great here too... i can actually read this to a beat
- LOL nice swet band diss!!!
- nice computer chair diss
- okay ender...

its clear who won here.