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Old 11-21-03, 12:36 PM   #8
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PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE FOR ME VOTING HERE!

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93272

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LM-

- ROFL he's a wank line was funny
- middle was kinda soft... flow is gettin off
- not bad flow on the ending... but you could have done better
- work on ya structure a bit...

Funn DementaLL-

- okay opener...
- middle is kinda week... where are the punches? lol
- rhyme scheme is good... but they are week punches
- kinda week ending too

this is gonna be hard to vote for... i gotta go with LM for his opener line. that was the best line in the battle.