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Old 11-21-03, 01:04 PM   #14
Lethargic
Middle Weight
 
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From: Campbellsville
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I Stone Fags & Merk Herbs..& I Do Be Smokin' Crack Pipes..
Not Another N00b Verse.? I'm Dope..Hes The Token Whack Guy!!

^Eh...okay...not a good opener though.

He Got No Chance To Win..1st Token Then Enhance..Who Write Ya Rhymes.?
Fag^ Could Chill With Horny Cainines And Still Not Have Dawgs By His Side!!!

^Anything having to do with Canines and biting/your dogs...anything of that sort...is played to hell and back.

Kid Cant Defeat Me..Puns Be Weak..Ya Hurtin Soft Im Wreckin Fables..
Got Proof He's Queer..His Avy Looks Like Hes Jerkin' Cock And Gettin' Anal!!

^Good flow...Not very hard hitting though.

Drop 5 Puns On You..Ahh x2..So I Burn Then Leave You Fry-Ten'd-Fool..
Kid Got Merked Last Week..By A Bulb!!I Know I Don't Need To N LitEn You!?!

^First line's extremely forced, second was okay.

Slap This Kid..Witness The Merking In Reverse..Cunt You Suck..
Fag..Comes Half Assed Then Lays Down..So 'Volve Can Fuck Him Up!!

^1st line, bleh....2nd line was funny.

Fuckin Wit' phiX..It's Like Throwing Pussies To Lions..Bitch's Maimed..
Match-Up Left Enhance..I Mean Token..Uh? Tryna Dodge Battlin' By Switchin' Names!!

^Bad closer.

You should've taken your own advice when you said Run Nucca Run
PhiXion couldn't spit hard punches with rocks attatched to his tongue

^Weak opener...

Your lines have no flow.. like guys with urinary infections
Get the boxing network for a chance to have punching
connections

^No...played to death.

The vision of phixions stay is getting smaller, like dialated lenses
If your visualizing a win, then your missing your pupil senses

^Weak...

We told you to get courageous.. and you jumped off a bridge
Your verse was the cause.. for that smiley in my sig

^Okay..a little bleh though.

It's do or die.. So take The Ends advice and go post at the best site
Whos taking you serious when your idea of whats hot is made by little tikes

^*sigh*

You must not be seeing the right W.. like people on blind dates
And as a token of my appreciation
...I made you a new avy...
But for some reason it stopped at elevate

^No, forced closer. You had to create a whole new avy...just to make that punch work. That's weak. That's like Hi My Name Is... sending me two bars through PM's 1 minute before he posted his verse just to make a punch in his verse valid.

Overall: I'm very disappointed. I KNOW Token can come a lot better than this. That alone pisses me off cuz that makes it seem like you didn't try at all. I don't know much about Phixion...but there wasn't anything too impressive about his verse. Blah battle

Vote - Phixion for less retarded punches.

No Beef, just facts. Get serious about this shit. I know it's just online, but stupid verses like those take all the fun out of it.

Vote - Neither in LLL.