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Old 11-21-03, 01:17 PM   #6
Lethargic
Middle Weight
 
Posts: 828
From: Campbellsville
IP:

I punch heads off, so u come to me seeking en light ment.
receive me with an open mouth, and its not cause u are frightened.

^1st punch blah, 2nd punch was funny but could have been worded better.

ya pulse is heightened, cause bribes' increasing ya blood flow.
I'm why ure face hurts, dragging u head first through the mud slow.

^Weak punch.

a poor soul, destined to be a no body forever
flirt cause u love my wize ass, and its not cause I am clever.

^Second line blah, but I liked the first, lol.

I'll shoot at the whites of ya eyes when they come into view
I'll toy with this kid more than once, like a jackson dejavu

^1st line was eh...second line was poorly worded.

right on cue witt no remorse i make a cut at the scene.
Leave u swimming witt fishes,. so your aquatic talent could be seen.

^1st line had good wordplay, weak punch. 2nd was blah. Poor closer.

“Fuck A Bribe”, Everytime That’s Mentioned B Is There Ready And Waitin
Misundastood Child, Bribes Scared Of Confrontation <--- He’s Already Faintin!

^1st line was kinda okay...good flow in second line...

I Spit Abrasive Scars…U Put Ya Heart In The Game, Here’s A Fact: Look,
U Got Less Chance Of Getting Signed Than A Retarded Kids Yearbook!!

^lol

The Doubts Gone…And You Know The Shadow Is Lurkin In Front Of Bribe!
Left Heads Turned Like The Tide…While I Bribe one & 1 To Run And Hide!!

^okay

NoW bRiBe, WrItE LiKe ThIs, Coz Its Played & A Bitch To Read, Like Ya Verse!
Here’s A Quick Question...”Ya Looks…Or Ya Skills…Tell Me Whats Worse?!”

^okay..

Basically Bribe, You Cant Escape This Coz The Win Is In My Eye Sight
And If Ya Wonderin Why This Verse Is A Link…
…Coz When It Comes To It…Everything Of Mine Is A High Light!!

^Weak closer...last line was same as Token's...you had to create something just to make it work...blah.

Close battle. N definitely took the flow...there's no doubt about that. Wordplay was pretty even...Bribe's was more effective if you ask me. Punches..I'm gonna have to go with N on the punches. Not by much though... If Bribe could word his lines better, he could be a dangerous opponent. Decent battle..

Vote ~ N