I thought the last stanza was too cliche.

'feelings escapes'???
^^^other than that technically sound...obviously.

The rest was good, topic universal but you took a very negative stance... even though it doesn't come across that way. It seems ironic that one would write this with such confusion and not enough sense of journey or knowledge...
don't mean to put you down dude, I love your shit, but something here didn't sit right... it might be me and my mindstate or a sense that I'm overwhelmed but it came across as though you wrote it for the sake of writing something.
.wurd.to.writing.though.
keep thinking and you'll find answers...
.peace.

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