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Old 11-21-03, 11:13 PM   #2
KLINIK
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the title catched my attention .. i like the idea that you wrote a song for ya boy .. that's keepin it real right there

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My Heart Fulfilled, Yet At The Same Time Empty

^^feelin that line .. line was deep!

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Close Your Eyes.. Think Of The Times Of How..
Toddlers 2 Kids, Kids 2 Youth n’ Youth To Now..

^^ i liked that

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Same Town, Same Streets, Same Raps, Different Beats..
Same Life, Same Friends, Same Goals But Different Ends

^^ sweet internal rhyme scheme .. it was deep as well

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You Can Pack The Memories, But You Cant Pack The Years..
N’ When Your Not Here, I Got Nothing There To Back These Tears

^^this was my favorite .. you hit it deep

the lil outro at the end .. that was pretty deep as well .. i really don't see any down fall .. just keep droppin homie .. get at me! peep my sig yo .. and return the favor
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