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the title catched my attention .. i like the idea that you wrote a song for ya boy .. that's keepin it real right there
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My Heart Fulfilled, Yet At The Same Time Empty
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^^feelin that line .. line was deep!
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Close Your Eyes.. Think Of The Times Of How..
Toddlers 2 Kids, Kids 2 Youth n’ Youth To Now..
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^^ i liked that
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Same Town, Same Streets, Same Raps, Different Beats..
Same Life, Same Friends, Same Goals But Different Ends
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^^ sweet internal rhyme scheme .. it was deep as well
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You Can Pack The Memories, But You Cant Pack The Years..
N’ When Your Not Here, I Got Nothing There To Back These Tears
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^^this was my favorite .. you hit it deep
the lil outro at the end .. that was pretty deep as well .. i really don't see any down fall .. just keep droppin homie .. get at me! peep my sig yo .. and return the favor
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