*gazez with mouth open*

DAAAAAAMN

HOLY SHIT THAT WAS INSANE!

One of the best ones i have ever read no doubt. Shit this is awesome. Good emotion, structure, flow, vocab wordplay, AWESOME! Dam u hit the spot on this. Nice expression in ure words and lines i loved it.

Overall Grade:

10/10

I RARELY GIVE THAT ONE OUT MUCH LOVE