^LMFAO ... Homeboy's trippin ... This was dope Peeps ... An original topic ... And dope too ... Very abstract ... Very well written ... Scheme and multi's were on point ... Didn't catch the flow fall off once in this piece ... Imagery was highly dope in this piece ... Everythin' came together well to make this piece dope ... The way U wrote the first verse opened this piece up a lot to me and made me keep readin' ... But how U changed the story was even better ... Keep doin' your thing man ... Oh and by the way ... From that post up there ... I should juss say this now ... Nice havin' u here for a day ... LoL ... Peace