dam nice work here really liked it because it kinda related to mien in a way...but anyway..
Real good emotions very heart felt i know where ya comin from. I liked how this one didnt rhyme much i dont think it wouldve been as good. You gotta do what u do and if it rhymes then let it be but this was a very nice piece. A good read and i wanna read another
Overall grade:
8/10