don't mean to put you down dude, I love your shit, but something here didn't sit right...

i agree, dont worry, i appreciate ur responses, cus ur honest..i wouldn't want someone beatin' around the bush..and u don't..
anyways, i didn't exactly like this either, but ironically this piece relflects my emotions at this point in my life, more "obviously" then any piece i've ever written...

for some reason im questioning things so much that i don't really know what to think anymore...like when i REALLY think about it, i don't see how happiness differs from sadness, i feel like i've just always been sad for some reason..it's realy strange...sry to ramble on...i do'nt even know what im talkin' about right now

thx for all the replies, i appreciate em....