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Old 11-22-03, 08:36 AM   #8
Passivist
Hail the Undergods
 
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Originally posted by Jay-R
good flow

nice structure

good descriptive words (imagery)

nice closing

overall this was a pretty good drop

Return the favor, dogg:
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thanks for the feedback. I'll hit u up
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