weak battle

I coulda came outta my coffin, See, I dont giva fuck about the sun - (son) <<<< no need for son in parenthesis
Im Coughin out laughter! This idiot missed my heart and hit my lung!!!!!! <<<< weak line, flows way off

This key's better than you're writtens, By Readin My Verse Even you know that -
Voters! eat this Big herb lika Shroom, And Get ya eyes bigger than felix the Cat!!
<<<<<<<< ehhhhhh........and flows way off >>>>>>>>>>>>>

Heres the chances of you winnin This battle onna 50/50 basis -
(Tosses a coin)
Call It In the Air! (Lars: "I Call Neck!") Cmon man you wont win just face it!!!!!!
^^^ u cant flow period......you need to learn to cut ur lines short.....ur shit's 1 word too many.....

Does this really have to happen? Will it hurt In the end??? -
I donno, Lar.. How's it feel like ta let the whole Universe In?!?!
^^^ weak personal

Let go fuckin faggot! BITCH!!! Give up my fuckin cheese and Wine -
I just had Lar for dinner, For desert Im havin dinners leftover Lines!!!!!!
^^ u've used dinner twice in da same line....flows fucked.....and didnt hit hard


Heres a poem: An apples an apple, a peach is a peach -
They're both like my win and your loss, Easy ta reach!!!
^^^ cud never flow...but a fairly decent punch, nothing hard

I can see right thru you, theres a whole in ya chest -
Bird Mans Done, His verses mo sloppy than a Birds Nest!!!
^^^ used bird twice..........and this line was ass

Call me ya daddy, don worry, if your my son I'll do my Part -
I'll leave Lars walkin lika zombie, Hes Trya reach the stars!!
^^^ isnt "reaching da stars" lines real old?....a played concept

flow = lar
structure = lar
multis = none
punches = none
creativity = emcee (lolol atleast he tried that is)

vote = lar

weak battle, emcee came wack, and lar spit.....but no punches...........