Emotion...After reading some of your other stuff, this piece sort of disappointed me. The imagery, the flow and everything was there, with the exception of a rhyme scheme, that really hurt your piece badly.

Deacon...Your piece was very very good. Tells a vivid tale of the Atomic bombing and it really really mesmerized me. That was a good drop.

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