wanna play doctor????????
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IP:
Deacon deffinately got this...
Emotion..i'd get lost in ur rhyme scheme...really...
work on a better structure...the story wasn't all that good...
imagry was iffy... n all that...
Deacon...this was quite nice...started off decent...
n seemed to keep on improving as it went..
had some killer flow to it...great imagry
vote-deacon
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