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Old 11-22-03, 12:51 PM   #2
Formula
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Seriously. . This Was Wack Man. Horrible Flow. Some Of Your Lines Didn't Even Make Sense.

Example :

for real i wasnt raised from the streets, neva packed heat on the streets or made ma' name on the streets or take a girl to the beach //
at least now i got the ballz 2 admit that im normal, didnt cum from the gutter or make an AKA 'stutter'//

^^ What The Hell ?

Honestly, You Need Some Work Man. There Is A Wackness Emergency Center Here, Take A Visit. Also, You Over-Used The Curses Man.

"mother-fuckin god damn site"

^^ Not Needed.

Elevate Big Time.

-Formula.
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