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Old 11-22-03, 01:00 PM   #7
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You actually dope? Whats all this talk of hoax and hexes

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Originally Posted By The End
(And Chrit would murder you.. He has a voting ring the size of Texas.)
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This was okay...... you could have came stronger with the first line but nonetheless, ive never seen a pm quoted in content in a verse before, it it was creative..... 7.5/10


^ There's proof he's all hype.. Your talent has always been lost
You accelerating in this battle is like street racers without nos

I like this punch.... the 2nd line is great..... street racing is the shit lol.. except i went to court for it...... 9/10

You're like the home shopping network.. Never get what you order
Lines so far from hot, it's like you ski'd Thru Alaska to cross the border

The home shopping network line is good, you dont watch that shit do you? lol.... 2nd like was aight, coulda been a 9 but im taking off a 1/2 point for wording.... 8.5/10

You think you're hard for being in jail for beating up two men
That's only half of the beats you had while you were there, chritenen

This is okay.... it talks about masturbation tho and I think sex punches are stupid..... but ill add a .5 onto this for the fact that he actually came up with a sex line thats not played 7.5/10

[font size=4]Chrits Verse[/font]

Man fucka Token... Polar opposite of Superman...
Since when he goes in the booth,,,
....He comes out LESS of a man

Hmmm..... this was kinda a WaCk punch.... the rhyme scheme is weak, Superman/Man.... comon Chrit your better than that... 6/10

Kid'll come with old personal and no matter what he thinks...
We're all tired of em...
...I mean even Zelda hates his links

Good punch..... The Chrit picture has been used by Brixton and the Zelda/Link play is good..... 9/10

Kid got his record for given it... While I constantly crush domes...
And I'd call this a barn-burner but that'd put you out of a home...

This punch was aight.... 8.5

Attend a Token party whenever I wanna see bashin of gays...
And I was done last night but...

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ThaRemix23: yeah i gotta pre write so it'll take me till tommorow anyways.
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This is really fed.... you just stole Tokens thing of quoting in the SAME battle.... w/e tho I wont count against that.... 7.5/10

TOKENS SCORES- 7.5 , 9 , 8.5 , 7.5 - 32.5

CHRITS SCORES- 6 , 9 , 8.5 , 8.5 - 32

Opener- Token
Closer- Chrit
Flow- Token
Punches- Token [By .5]
Creativity- Tie

Overall- Token