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Old 11-22-03, 01:06 PM   #7
Formula
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Loco. . You Seriously Gotta Problem Kid.

Peepers. . I Haven't Been Able To Say This In Awhile. . So It Feels Good To Say-- You Had An Original Topic ! Props For That. Very Drop Read Man. Great Imagery Throughout The Piece. I Loved The Idea Of Writing This Piece From A Camera's Point Of View. . That Shit Was Nice. Well-Written On Your Part Man, I Loved How The Story Switched Up, From Talkin About The Son's Death Then Sayin That The Mother Purchased A Shotty To Kill The Murderer. Great Shit. Flow Never Once Fell Off When I Was Readin It. Very Dope Read For Me, I Enjoyed It. Keep Droppin The Gems.

-Formula.
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