emotion. i like your story. you dropped pretty nice. but your rhyming sucked ass like a lolipop. if you had dope flow and rhyming, you would have killed this shit

deacon- nice drop. enough to beat emotion, but room for improvement, if your story had developed more smoothly...i dont wana read 10 lines about the sky before i hear about something else

but both got good skill. vote- deacon

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