pretty tight... I was actually lookin for one of your pieces, because you replied to everyones tracks wit constructive criticsm..
I actually liked this alot, yea nigga i feel ur pain

girls got that specially wen u love em...
but at the end is feeled a lil forced:
Maybe I shouldn’t have took you for granted, face it I died-
When I asked you to forgive me, and you stated “Goodbye”-