This was a great drop. One problem, ur only allowed 2 on the front page. Watch that next time. Back to this...this was a great piece. you put a lot of emotion and thought into this. The structure was a lil off, but it turned out iight. I liked ur analysis on your view of life. You did a great job of expressing your ideas and feelings. It had a nice twist at the end, making it as if that evil person that you spoke of was yourself. Overall I loved it. Great job. Keep it up. Most respect.