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Old 11-22-03, 03:04 PM   #11
MP~PHASIZ
Aint Nobody Iller Than Me
 
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Originally posted by The 13th Apostle
You have an excellent vocabulary, your bars are a bit too long to flow correctly, work on that. You have a very scientific/intelligent style...sort of liek the canibus-man. This was a solid track, I'd like to see you shorten th ebars up a bit and drop it to audio.

7/10

Work on your lfow, and you'll be vicous.

P.e.a.c.e.


Yeah, i was quick to find that my bars were too long when I went to make an audio of this. So the song's currently being edited...
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