set this wasnt a battle verse.....you had very few punches, it flowed very nicely, but made no sense at all...what liner's verse lacked in sturcture it made up for in punches
I break it down like this:

flow - set -- important in a battle rhyem, but difficult to assign a position, it affects everything....which set had a better flow, but no punches, or any of the other top categories

punches - liner -2nd most important category

sturcture - set 7th, good punches make up for poor sturcture

creativity - set 6th most important

vocab - set, althoguh ive seen alot of those words form u b4 an di think abotu 3 of those lines are recycled

Disses - liner - 1st most important category

metas - set 5th

opener - liner - 3rd most important category

closer - set 4th most important


overall sets verse was better, and if this was pure rhyming, jsu judging the rap, id vote set

but thsi is a battle, liner came at you harder, dissed u harder and better....u didnt realy dis him, jus recycled words and lines, the ones u thinka re u best.....set u can rhyme, but u can't battle, u came close but jus lacked too mcuh in disses and punches, it was realyl a close battle, porlly set's best yet, but liner took it


vote liner

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