Thread: Lyrical Demons
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Old 11-22-03, 03:27 PM   #2
The 13th Apostle
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audo now huh? i sense a collaboration in the near future...

anyway, lets get down to business...

first guy...his verse was solid, not a bad rhyme scheme. some adibs were off. volume is good, but it faded a few times. he stayed on beat pretty well, he has a nice flow.

second dude...he needs to show more emotion..oh wait, he's not with you, there's no need to comment on him..

third (you)...you have a sick voice..solid ass verse. flow is perfect. show more emoiton asshole, lol. you can't spit on a canibus beat like this! you have to get pissed at the mic dogg. lol.

the quality of the track it's self was nice, real nice, worth the listen. the qualit yof the vocals was a bit poo poo, but i can help you with that. this was a dope track. with better quality and more meotion, i could've been sickening.

7/10

Nice shit fam.



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