Thread: TAG v. 1liner
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Old 11-22-03, 05:21 PM   #4
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TAG

I'll start this out slow and then speed up the track
Have you convulsing like you jus sniffed a line of Anthrax/
(how do u sniff a "line" of anthrax)3-10

My lyrics are sharp and straight to da point fool
They'll leave ya trippin worse than a 3rd grader sniffin glue/
(not feelin it)0-10

Actually, 1 line is all I need, to beat this wannabe MC
Naturally, he tryin hard to feed, off my flow to meet his needs/
(decent, could of been better)5-10

1 Line Is Never Enough Remember that when you feelin tough
You're rhyme aint shit I'll roll up my cuffs, and take ya out like the garbage pick up
(not bad)6-10


1liner

i spit this close -to stump tag--and daunt his health
So Hes the first ghost --to come back--and haunt his self
(I like this one)7-10

my rhymes hit like a pimp back slap with his own hand
cuz ima leave this gimp cracked-- Jacked and Tagged in his home-land
(aiight but not feelin it)1-10

Dawg just be gald you aint battle me in person
Cuz I'm fuckin LMAO (cuz i see who i'm Versin) -----------------his Av
(WTF is this)0-10

A bitch with a visor whos afraid so show his face.
my rhymes likea prostitute Lawyer Cuz of the way i'll blow his case
(could of been better)2-10

These are My last 2 lines so i write-em like a death-note-With Fallin-lines
Cuz i merk'D this jock like a white boy with a treanchCoat-at Calumbine
(not bad)5-10

overall: 1liner-15 Tag-14

really close battle....i have seen better from both.. i think both lacked off on this battle........but my vote goes to 1liner.. no hate tag.. dont think i voted on 1liner cause we in same crew..you rules dont state no-crew votes...my vote was explained crystal clear....

PZ
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