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But this was ok...it was really long lol....the first verses were alright could have added some multies and internals to help the flow in both of those, it flowed ok could have been better...the second verses were alright as well vocab could have been better though and the same with the first verses....the chorus was alright i thought....overall this was ok i thought...keep at it and keep dropping.