The structure of it threw me for a loop. I couldn't grasp the flow at times, but there was a bit of a flow to it. You could have written it differently, instead of paragraph form.. but it was still okay. The vocabulary you used was amazing, but at times I couldn't feel where you were going. No hate, but I wasnt feeling this. It was good, though. No hate. <3 Much love.

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