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Old 11-22-03, 09:47 PM   #8
Twizted Ayngel
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Every line was overflowing with emotion.. it was like.. hurt, sadness, anger.. all rolled into the words. It was ill the way you wrote it, and the flow was off the hook. The structure doesnt matter when it flows as well as this did. One of the deepest I've read in a while. Perfect, nothing I would change. Good drop!! Keep 'em comin!
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