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Old 11-22-03, 09:53 PM   #4
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This was pretty good i thought....you both had pretty good structure work on the line length though....The Intro was pretty cool lol....vocab from both of you was pretty good i thought, could be up'd a bit though but still good overall....both of you had good flow in your verses but Rich add some internals and multies to yours to help it out more....overall i thought this was a good collab...keep at it and keep dropping..
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