this was decent. i liked it...good idea too.
i digged the mixed story. and i like the things u did at that party haha...

room for improvement though. if you kick in an ill flow and rhyme scheme, it would have been dope. that was close to a perfect story, cuz i really liked it, so if u put in all the other close-to-perfects, it would have been ILLLLLLL. but like i said, work on improving. keep droppin

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